 Gaki Toki 2005-07-10 . chapter 1Holy crap...man I hate it when things like that happen, but I think if I was doing a speech like that, I could create SOMETHING...I dunno, count me out, I can't create speeches, I may be half german but I'm no Hitler. Anyways, this was a wonderful poem I loved it and I also love how so many people (I would imagine) have the same issue. This was great, absolutely stunning, and I (As well as many of your reviewers it seems) loved your tenth line. ^_^ This was great, Good work!
Much Love, Gaki Toki |
 graffiti-skies 2005-07-01 . chapter 1stage fright, something ive been tryin to get over since forever and it goes almost exactly as you wrote in your poem! the imagery is really good!
i especially liked the line:
'"Scream like Tarzan, make a monkey sound, or better yet, forget your speech."' |