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| Maury Hime 2005-07-12 ch 1,  | abusehuh...that was sad. But I laughed at the end? -_-;; sorry, it was really good though! |
| punkispurple 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abuseAww thats so sad, but i really like it. I can't think of much to say sorry, but its really good.. i like how you've had the three (or is it foue) smal lines to start the different stanzas :) |
| HuRt-AnD-Al0nE 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abusethis is really good... i love it... *adds to favorites* |
| The Moribund Marionette 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseOh...this was sad, yet...so sweet...it reminded me of Shirley Jackson's "The Lottery". If you've read it, you may be able to see why, although it's kind of a polar opposite in a way as well. If you haven't read it, you should. It's fantastic. But I'm not here to promote reading material, am I? :) Don't shroud the shadows, ~Writer of Darkness~ |
| TheCryingGame 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. 'Tis lovely. ~TheCryingGame |