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Reviews For: Fairytales Abridged - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

dot dot dot
2007-11-17
ch 9, anon.
abusePlease update! I wanna find out what happens with the father
paputsza
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuse... i'm confused "banana orange"? i can't imagine that color.
i-see-faeries
2007-09-14
ch 9,
abuseDefinately one of the best slash fics I've read in a LONG, LONG while. Great job. I love it.
Wizard of Souls
2007-06-28
ch 5,
abuseI really enjoy this so far. I've noticed a few small spelling mistakes, but they're never big enough to really jump out too much. I like how you've portrayed the two as semi-opposites. I can't wait to read more of it later.
blackrose214
2007-06-19
ch 9,
abusewow. another great story from you! love it. terry is so cute and Evan is so caring - they`re so sweet. The story ís really interesting and I hope you update soon! I`ll be waiting! :D
Kayla
2006-09-06
ch 8, anon.
abuseI just read all that you have so far and its great! I hope you update soon. I want to see what Terry's dad does, and Tiffany! Does she still have a boy friend?
Astrido
2006-08-21
ch 8, anon.
abusewow. as i already said this story is really good. please, go on soon.i should write more comments, so more people will read it...*gg*

cyu as^^
Astrido
2006-08-21
ch 4, anon.
abusehi, your story is really great. very much underapreciated!!although you could mark the switches between evan and terry more clearly.i love it!

cyu as^^
Micchansan
2006-07-29
ch 7,
abuseOkay... this is my second review (i'm not allowed to review again in the chapter eight so I went back ^^):THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICTIONS I'VE EVER READ! Terry is so adorable! I hope I'll get a boyfriend like he is! (I'm a girl btw) How can you make such a good story?! I can't wait for the next update! Evan's gorgeous (I can imagine who he'd look like and draw a picture of him according to my perspetive)! I can also imagine how Terry would look like! He'd look like Yuuri Shibuya from Kyo Kara Maou except he's a brunette! Oh gyosh.. this story is amazing!! Update soon!
Micchansan
2006-07-28
ch 8,
abuseI like it! Update soon!
Account
2006-06-28
ch 8,
abuseHUZZAH! I so adore this story and was starting to get nervous about the lack of updating, but I see there is no need to fear, for Fairytales Abridged is alive and well!Tiffany is a funny character. A girl very intent on getting a boy not interested in her gender. I see this as light hearted fun and stuff to joke about, but will she become a solid threat later on? You have me hooked and wondering.Poor Terry so out of it that day at school, but with Evan being so hot and well, who can't not think about him? Cackle, cackle.

I can't wait for more. I'm looking forward to some more of that nice in depth character devolpment from the previous chapter, though I do love fluffy moments, and some interesting drama practices. Oh and Halloween! I can't wait to see what their plans will be. Aya and Evan scaring Terry dressed as homocidal clowns of something? Hm, something to ponder over...lol.I look forward to that update and great job! You still have a solid fan! Best luck.

Prof. D
Prisoner-11
2006-04-03
ch 7,
abuseWhat?!?! I didn't review last time I read this?!?!? Lol. It's great. I luv Evan! If he was straight I'd totally wouldn't leave him alone!
some guy
2006-03-26
ch 7, anon.
abuseThis was great, I mean there were errors in some places, but that's just menial stuff to go over with a friend and clear up. The emotions in this chapter just blew me away, I got goosebumps. You also have such a delicate way with words, descriptive. I love your writing, can't wait for the next chapter! Sorry this isn't a descriptive review, just an appreciation, keep up the good work!
Prisoner-11
2006-01-15
ch 1,
abuseWoot! Nothing like staying up all night to read slash right? It's a little patchy though, you fail to mention some stuff that you say you will. Or have something pop out of nowhere. However! I really like this story! Hehe...Ini-T lead me here. More soon please!
Skarlog
2006-01-15
ch 7,
abuseThey didn't eat dessert! Sometimes I find that you either forget or just don't put in some factors that you take care to mention earlier in the passage. And Terry's mother had specifically mentioned that she wasn't going to tell him was dessert was.
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