i know how you feel- this was very beautifully written and i liked the format P

Poetic cruelness :D Lots of disturbing images this has :D

I love how you make the point of showing how the daughter/son wants to be free. Prays, wishes, needs to be free, but is chained down by the mother's words. Her awful, awful words. Very good poem, wonderful descriptions, very good. :)

Very sad.