That's really beautiful and really personal. ^_^ Personal in the sense that the reader can picture everything you're thinking and probably relate to it in some way or another.

It must be hard, loosing her...*hugs* I can't say I know what you're going through, but I can say that this poem helps me to understand.And there's nothing wrong with getting emotional over it. Great job on this. :)

This is Taylor from LJ, btw.