Love does come with pain and depression, and you captured it perfectly!

nice as well! write on forever ;)

i lik it... i can relate i really love the ending

Interesting expression of emotions.

fantastic! i really like the questions in it. leaves so much to be wondered about. awesome job!

SP

oh wicked last line- love it. great poem, it has an awesome flow to it and i like the thoughts in it- very emotional and heartfelt. very moving, & thought provoking, great stuff.