I cried...
so wonderfully written ending

beautiful :D

i love kodak moments :D


i love this story :D

soo awesome

ek! :D :D :D
i read this ALL in one sitting. it was so good i couldnt get away!! and now i have to stay up untill 2:00 PM again since i didnt do my homework! XD

THANKS SO MUCH for this WONDERFUL AWESOME FUNNY CUTE story!! :D :D :D
one of the bests i've EVER seen!! :D :D :D

awhh, how cute? I liked that it wasn't like "I've been in love with you ever since I met you!" Authors always end up making everything mushier than like you thought it would be! this was more realistic.

so, god job :)

this story is worth reading! it's so great! XD I learned a lot of bad words, though. HAHA!

ah! love it! :))

they look good together!! SWEET! :)

Shelly's good! Ha ha! When will they're finally agree with each other? :)

AH!

"We'll find a way"

*tear*

He has a heart!

aw! I loved the story! it was great! at first i wasnt sure to read it because i have no knowledge in football, but i'm glad i've read it! i loved these lines:
"Cue the ‘Hallelujah’ chorus. Throw confetti. Jump for joy. Dance like no one’s watching. Shout as if you’re the happiest person on earth. Bust out some glowsticks and have a rave right where you are right now.

It’s about ** time."

GREAT STORY ♥

ah! how i love witty heroines and a cocky prince charming. Such a sweet story. It reminded me of another FP story though it revolves mostly on basketball. the ending is sweet and realistic.

Who knew Brandon Millers can be ** sappy? :)) He may be an ** most of the time but he's just great and i love him to bits. Never saw any of his acts coming. specially the confessing part. ah. young love

Shelley Sinclair, i have to say is awesome. Cool witty retorts and such. :)) I love how she loves football and placed everything on the line for something she oh so desperately happened. The ending was a tear-jerker so is the part where she gives off a speech. inspiring. really?

Whatever happened to Taryn and Morgan and Destiny? They vanished towards the end. Team BS were also incognito. It's like they weren't there but just mentioned. I wonder whose coming with Shelley to NYU and whose coming with Brandon to USC.

Even though Zachary played a small role, i like him. :) AND Kyle. oh kyle. :)) those cousins.

The rest of the team were also cool. Johnny and his-or as Brandon puts it- "fagness" is cute. Alex. well i feel like there's more to him. James, well, i don't know him really besides him being quiet on their first date and receiving the "nail" award.

All in all this was a fun and funny story. I love the Humor and Romance. Cliched as it is, it's still cute. Most of the stories are cliched but just do a twist here and there and bam! An epic story. Great job. Though this was done like 3 years ago, it's still timeless. :)

Great story.Enough laughs to keep it light, and enough drama/romance to keep me hooked. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

Loving the story so far. Shelley and Brandon are so funny. Can't wait to read more... stupid early mornings :)

ooh... I like this story. Interesting premise, the coaching thing. It's bedtime now :( but I can't wait to read more tomorrow!