I absolutely love the way this is written.Good job. After reading several of your works on here I must say you have talent.

So deppressing... but well written. Great job.

love as always Ally *CarrotCraverCutie*

love the last line of the poem, and the imagery is so geat.

great imagery... i love it! keep up the great writting

okay, first off i'm going to say good imagery...definitely that's the first thing i noticed about this poem.

i must admit, however, that i got lost in the all the bleeding/thundering/cloudy/teary images. i was tempted to scroll, although i didn't.

nice job!!

and i saw your bio, the part about being vegeterian. six years is a long time! i've been a vegeterian for about seven months now. go us!! :D

This is a great explosion of dark imagery. The action images are well thought out and capture the flow well. Really unique word placement and choice here which creates a rather sinister overall tone and work. Good write.

extremely vivid and "full of adrenaline"

I love everything about it. Thanx for the review and keep up the great work!

Depressing for the sake of being depressive. Sorry if it doesn't sound like a compliment, but really is meant to be one.

I love this, this is amazing, great work!

intense, the last line was beautiful... well done

Hm very intresting I like it, it is like Apoclypse with a side of Angst, I enjoy the imagery, it has a nice sickening feel to it.

Joseph

Essentially speaking, were it possible for a poem to perfectly convey human emotion I would choose this one to represent it.

Wow, this is amazing! It's so well written. Outstanding! Fantastic! Keep writing!

Thank you very much for reviewing me!

~Anna~

Amazing. I loved it, beautifully written. Well done. caliorbust