i don't understand that paragraph in the middle. about sam and her bf. it's so choppy and unrealistic. sorry. it just doesn't make sense to me.
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that's so depressing!
but it was really, really good! yay!

Hope you will put more chapters!! I love it

So far so good. I like your work. Plus Cody sounds hot. I especially like your dialouge skills.

hey! Ish really deep and good. Im impressed. Well, keep up the good work!

You must like the name Ben!

wow... this sounds like it's going to be really good!! I like it a lot. Keep up the good work! anyways, ill check back later for more. ~*brokenxdreams*~

its really good so far update soon :)

This is way more than a romance story (and trust me, I've read a few in my time), this is deep, gripping stuff. It's really refreshing to read something where the characters have actual personalities rather than shallow, meaningless physical description. I'm definitely adding you to my AuthorAlert - keep going!