WHAT? Ed! Did you actually do that? Dude! *Facepalm* - If you really did that, then I bow to the ever-so brave Effy Durach. That takes a lot of guts. I personally wouldn't have been able to stay in a university like that, but I wouldn't have the gall to go back.

Anyway, about the writing, I felt that it was too short - would've loved to have seen more description, and definitely more insanity, and more similarity to the first chapter. Nonetheless, I truly enjoyed this, the sarcasm, everything! The last line was gasp-inducing. So bravo. :P

Hehehe, I like this. You are VERY funny. I can't believe you went back hahaha, nice. Hey I'd probably do the same if I felt restrained by elders :P

haha ahh yess. if i felt THAT homesick then i would have gone back home myself :) great job!

LOL! Cute. 'The Highschool Life of Me' XD

omg. wait. are you for real? Did you really do that? are these real stories? YOU WENT BACK? *laughts helplessly* well, if this isn't true, it was very cute. if it was true... wow. email me. CRAZY! I LOVE It!w

Wonderful, wonderful! I really enjoyed this, because so much of what I am is in this essay. I love the girl's narrative - she sounds very professional, and yet sarcastic and fun at the same time.

The only mistakes I found were the elipses (there are supposed to be three), and "alphabets" is supposed to be "alphabet."

I truly wish that you could continue this story, although it sounds amazing and very original as a one-shot, short piece. Loved it, Ed.

HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA! OH MI GOSH! THAT...WAS...HILARIOUS...! yes i can b defined as one of those "weird gurls" at school...

lol. the person people love to talk to... i sorta have that, people find me easy to talk to. and he stuff i learn about them freaks me out ^^

"falling into the drain" lol. very amusing.

"They are the same ones with the weird sense of humor and who avoid attention at all costs. So, if the teacher were to say, "Hmm. Who wants to sign up for the dances?" then you will probably find our specimen cowering behind her best friend." - :: shifty eyes :: nah, lol. kidding. I'm the one grabbing the hall pass and hiding out into the bathroom till all the dance spots are filled up.

cute and funny. in kindergarden i was the weird girl whose mom made her wear long sleeves in May. i think i'm still like that a little, too...