I like it! Do it again! Do it again! hehe. 0.o' Hopeless romantic, what can I say? now get to the lovin'!

i have one problem with this story so farand that is how the mother reacted when she was told that her daughter was rapedshe acted like she didnt careit seemed like a "oh that sucks...so whats for dinner" kind of thingmaybe thats what u were going for but if not u might want to make it look like she cared a bit more