sad but beautiful, although i cant offer much condolence to you for this ironic revelation we all discover- i must say you have a way with your words!

I can really relate to and strong. Well done! queenvixta

i like this...i can relate & i like repitition of the first line

awesomely awesome job

yah, i have a poem on called nothing lasts 4ever...

aw babe, my heart goes out to you so much, i know exactly how ur feeling...i'm really sorry that you have to go through this, but you will get through and know i'm here for you every step of the way, never doubt that...but this was amazing so much emotion and love and sadness, i love it...well done. lots of love Alex

o...pretty! I liked the way you ended it! kw

That's so sad... I really like it. The repition of "I asked you for your forever" was really good, and how you altered it in the last stanza was also brilliant. I usually pick a favourite stanza.. but I cant, tehy're all really good. Super nice job.

good rhyming, and i like what it says. i can totally relate to what youre trying to say. i hate it when ppl u love/care abt let you down...its like one of the worst things u can do to a person

this poem is so sad, but well-written... i especially liked the second passage... fantastic... keep up the good work... btw, if u have time, please read and review sum of my stuff, especially 'once in a blue moon'... thanx...