|Reviews for The Fear of Death|
| LemonPeel 4/7/07 . chapter 1
I've spotted a couple of awkward sentences and a few more things, which will make me seem pedantic if I point them out. :D BUT, they don't really affect how good the story is.
Nice (and I choose the word wisely) dialogue between your two characters. Your story really amuses me; I get a noir-ish feel from it, and I love it. The story, however, may leave some readers...well...blank; and they may think of it as unwarranted punishment. Haha, but that's their problem. Anyway, I like it. I like it better than "What's Wrong with Being a Cannibal". :D
| DaybreakStorms08 1/5/06 . chapter 1
Intense. Quite a twisty plot. I like how it is, with just dialoge; you learn more about the characters through only what they say. It makes it much more impersonal, and intriguing - you don't know who to trust. I like it. I'm still not completely clear about the killer's motive for killing. Still, great job!
| tangled up in blue 9/15/05 . chapter 1
it is really a great piece of writing, and it reminds me of one of my favorite story, that is robert bloch's "yours truly, jack the ripper".
| Enigmatic Huntress 7/8/05 . chapter 1
This was good. I figured out what the twist would prob be but I liked the debate. Little question. Why was Michael the most corrupt monster on the planet? I thought he never killed anybody, just lived a selfish life? His "friend" might have helped him with his fear of death but he never helped him make peace with god. Good points raised about selfishness/ fear of change and hell and other moral issues. I think it should have prob been put in the play section rather than story section though. But this was well thought out. Luv Kaitx
| ambiguityy 7/4/05 . chapter 1
this was weird... it started off good but I didn't get the end. How was all the dialogue related to keeping the murder a secret?