o.o No offense to most people posting around here, but a lot of these songs suck. I'm really impressed by this one. Your grammar could use work (no offense intended AGAIN), but the rhyme scheme and the words and the emotion is really terrific. *claps*

strong, meaningful and depressing

Weird.

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Wow. Awesome. My grammie's first husband died at war, I bet these were his last thoughts. You rock. _

Wow, this is a very powerful poem. Good work!

wow, very powerful! i love your imagery, it leaves a very intense picture in my mind! the end was perfect to, and it really shows war in the perspective of how... well... stuoid it is, and how many people die for nothing.

That was good too. I'm not the biggest person to write on the topic of death, but this one was very good.

oh my, this was sooooooooo touching. :*( i loved it. you did a marvellous job with the imagery. isn't it sad that the different people in the world can only be united through grief? this poem might inspire me to write something similar later on, thank you so much!

This was very good. Dark, bur beautiful, as only death can be.

Oh wow, that was so powerful, it brought tears to my eyes!

this is so sad - but great.

that was so good. wow it totally describes the meaningless fighting of war, and that it really doesn't solve anything. - favorites...

WOAH! *blinks* That. Is. So Good! It reminds me of "In Flanders Fields," by John McCrae, 'cuz it has the same message, but it has its own sweetness. This is really powerful. It even moves like a song.

Really morbid, & yet your talking about the united states of America. Well written & it rhymes perfectly. Great job.