Whenever I get suicidal, I always think like this. Thanks.

Rock on,Susurrus.

-The Whispering Calls-

DON'T MAKE WAR MAKE TEA

Arugably, this stands between a worrying piece and a fictional one. Whichever it is, it's still beyond amazing... such darkness floods into our hearts.

Pefectly written. I honestly can't say anything that you haven't said here.

Hmm, Renee DOES need new medication!

Personally, I happen to believe that this is up there with your best works. It's so beautiful and a bit chilling because I can pictures parts of it in my mind as certain incidents, if you know what I mean (which you likely do). Reading "R.N.N.M." also gave me that warm and fuzzing feeling on the incide. Teeheehee.

There are certain parts that hold a lot of meaning to me that you are all too aware of. We will discuss this on our own, but I will take this time to say that I loved these lines:

"I shall dance in the penetrating lightAnd I shall not cry"

Well, that's all I can do for now.

With all due respect,Lucretia Baine

I personally think the title is very apt, and adds to the disturbing nature of the poem. This is a great piece, really well written. Good work.