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Kyande 2005-12-24 . chapter 17
::blushes horribly:: Gyaa! Nina-chan, you make a poor girl blush like you wouldn't believe! ::giggles:: You're so welcome, and I love chatting randomly with you! >> Which reminds me, I dunno if I told you in my last email, but I'm planning on making a story with a straight couple (OMG) for you! XD Just because you seem to get all twitchy when I write shonen-ai/shojo-ai. Won't be for a while though...

Gah! I can't believe this story is don't for though! ::sniffles:: You've come a long way with your writing, and you just keep getting better with each new story! Great job once again, and glad to see you're still writing! XD ::huggles::

Much love!

~Kchan
ChobiMM3 2005-12-24 . chapter 17
Nina-chan, you are so awesome! *tee hee* That whole Sanyo thing was so cute! You rock, thank you so much ^_^

I knew Kagome-chan's name had to somewhat come from Inuyasha...whenever I saw her name I always got a vison of Inuyasha's Kagome lol.

HAH! I knew some of it was like Clockstoppers! Gosh, I love this little extra thing...it reminds me of those bonus things they put in manga...by the way, this would be the coolest manga ever!

Hehe you'reso sweet Nina-chan...awesome bonus chapter and have oodles of fun in Japan!

Chobi
ChobiMM3 2005-12-17 . chapter 16
Wait...it's over?...No!

I can't wait for the epilogue; I'm sure it will be cute; indeed, your ending here was cute ^_^ Very nice; This was my favorite chapter actually. I love the way you described Kagome's transformation, and the rest of it was beautifully decribed as well. I know I was confused last chapter, but this one really cleared everything up for me. Aw, I'm kinda sad we didn't hear much of Sanyo...*sniffy*

Happy writing Nina-chan, and congards on finishing Tsumiyo Saga! *hugs*

Chobi

PS I updates Snow Child too, in case you wanted to know. No rush ^_^
Kyande 2005-12-16 . chapter 16
Neh?! I didn't review for the last chapter! Shame on me!

>> Anywho, lovely end to the story. Aww! Very cute at the end! ::sigh:: Kinda sad that this had to end, but ah well! Great story and can't wait to see the epilogue!

~Kchan
ChobiMM3 2005-12-09 . chapter 15
Darn, you left me hanging! That was a really great chapter; I was a little confused at the beginning but that's just me. I love how it ended, so cute! Please update soon.

Chobi

PS I'm so sorry it took me forever to review!
miyurai 2005-12-08 . chapter 15
okay, i don't relly know whats going on in this sroty bec ause I havent read any of the chapter except for this one. bur i think its pretty good (if i knew what is happy
Vampire Slayer Lee 2005-11-24 . chapter 6
hey good story i liked it

keep up the work k Bai...
ChobiMM3 2005-11-24 . chapter 14
Interesting chapter.

I must agree with you, those flying bananas are sure interesting ^_^ It just gives a better feel for the world that the protagonists are trapped in.

I am most definatly hooked now. This story can go anywhere, and you do an excellent job keeping people in suspense! Kudos Nina, keep it up ^^

Chobi
Kyande 2005-11-24 . chapter 14
Strange chapter indeedy, mate! ^^ I liked it though! lol

Oh, and I am an American, so I would celebrate Thanksgiving. It's just that up until like last year or so I lived in England. XD Ha! Well, take care and can't wait to see more chapters!

~Kchan
Kyande 2005-11-21 . chapter 13
Great job once again Nina-chan! ^^ Oh! Are you going to go through everyone's POV? Neat! And yeah, characters like your Kagome have a funny way of developing themselves. XD lol Take care and hope to see another chapter soon!

~Kchan
ChobiMM3 2005-11-20 . chapter 13
I really think this is one of my favorite chapters. You understand now why Kagome is Kagome, the relationship between herself and Miya, and other unanswred questions that are finanally answered.

On a side note, I'm so glad Sanyo's back!

Good job Nina

Chobi

PS sorry it took me a while for the review
Watashi no Himitsu Ai 2005-11-13 . chapter 3
This is really good so far. I have to finish reading up to Miya's POV another day.

By the way, yes, I'm PURE Japanese so I speak Japanese fluently and I happen to live in Uenoshiba between 20 to 30 kilometers from Osaka. Thanks so much for reviewing. I was about to give up!

Great job!

-Takahashi Michiko
Kyande 2005-11-12 . chapter 12
Whee! Thanks for mentioning me, Nina-chan! ::Hugs:: Loved the chapter in Miya's POV! Kinda gives you a nice little change in perspective! ^^ Cheers and hope to see another update soon!

Kchan
ChobiMM3 2005-11-12 . chapter 12
Oh my gosh, I can't believe you mentioned my name! You're so sweet Nina-chan!

Now for the review...

Ah,excellent chapter. Very nice. You can get a better feel through someone's POV, and Miya's is excellent. I full heartedly agree with her: How can someone have two boyfriends?! Anyway, I hope the love triangle gets cleared up {Don't we all!} Since all of the main characters, excluding Sanyo, are stuck in a fantasy world, this sound get good!

Keep it up

Chobi-chan
ChobiMM3 2005-11-01 . chapter 11
Excellent chapter. Very nice fanatsy world. *tee hee* I always used to picture them like that...Very nice. Keep it up
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