Beautiful, and somehow sensual. Wonderful job. Brava!

nice wording with "sliver moon" - I originally misread it as "silver moon" which also works. I like the calmness, the peace of this poem - great work.

This is a really pretty little poem. I love the image - it's just the sort of thing that tugs at my inner artist. I like how "soliloquy" gives the impression of solitude. In such a short poem, every word must have meaning. :)

lovely images! love the rhyme scheme, also!

~tuesday

Lovely rhyming and melodic incandescence to your words.

this is beautiful and almost magical in the idea it transmits. i love your rhyme scheme.

Excellent imagery, keep writing. You have talent.