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Quietly Losing Control 2006-08-21 ch 1,	abuseLame. I am obsessed with that word today...I guess I'll still count it as Monday since it's only half one and I'll probably be over it by the time I get up in the morning...afternoon. I just realised it sounds like I think this chapter is lame...that's not what I meant. I just like to say lame.
distractmefromreality 2006-06-27 ch 1,	abuseAHHAHAHAA. How the freak did Kimi get to be the most popular girl at school? The nerds at my school have WAY better insults than her.
Spawn of Hell 2005-07-12 ch 2,	abuseaww... that was a nice beginning of story... aiko seems cool enough... just give him some time to evolve... youll see. oh and i read your bio... and have decided youre cute... adorable. hum... ok. im a girl but that isnt the point. i know its a bit stupid to say this but you seem like a nice person. and funny too.and we have something in common: i HATE all discriminating people... anyone who thinks- and acts like- everybody is equal and should be left to be whatever they want to be is someone whos intelligent and mature. i mean, once you get that, you can turn out however you want, youll still be a worthy human being... oh and im sprouting useless stuff again. i got that bad habit... all that to say that from reading two of your fics and your bio, i thought youre cool. so ill end this stupidness before i die of embarassment... so dont mind me and keep writing!
Naomi Schemer 2005-07-07 ch 2,	abuseI think my cat likes this story as well, considering how hard she's making it for me to type (she's also purring). Nice story, even though it's lacking plot at the moment.
jma 2005-07-05 ch 2,	abuseI like the way Aiko is 'hot and cold', as you say. In a sense it shows realism. I know quite a few people, myself included, that feel comfortable around some people enough to act as they wish, while alone they can be rather... idiotic? Shy? Fearful? Etc... It's an odd concept, but a true one. Please, update soon! ^_^
Michiko87 2005-07-05 ch 2,	abuseI like this, but you should put into the manga catigory. It would just fit better. Nice writing!
Fallen Angel 229 2005-07-05 ch 2,	abuseHi! I just wanted to say that I really like this story so far, it's really good (just like the rest of your stories!)...um...one thing that I wanted to point out though...when the twins were saying good night, you used kombanwa...first it's spelled konbanwa...and it actually means good evening...good night is oyasumi or oyasumi nasai depending on how formal you want to be (oyasumi is informal and oyasumi nasai is more formal)...that was it though. Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
lilleo 2005-07-05 ch 2,	abusehehe kool, um don't have much to say at the moment, but thought id let you know im reading this!
jma 2005-07-05 ch 1,	abuseHeh. This is adorable. I'm totally interested in learning the 'Mega-Cool-Ultra-Super-Secret-Inoue-Twins-Handshake-of-Victory'^_^
Graphiti Skies 2005-07-04 ch 2,	abuseDun dun dun! Teh plot-u thickens-ez. I liked. ^.^ You did well dear. And Ichi is a little trouble maker. From the looks of your work load, I'd say you'd go insane before death. ^.^
xanthofile 2005-07-04 ch 2,	abuseoh yes, you definately have a unique style, at least to me. most of your main characters are very witty, and you have some interesting and hilarious "witicisms" that crack me up. i guess wit can be termed a type of style anyway. if that makes sense at all and yeah, no japanese-speaking for me...even though my step-grandmother is japanese, born and bred. i just know the delicious food there is to eat...! lol
Graphiti Skies 2005-07-03 ch 1,	abuse^.^ You're going to hurt yourself if you do too many stories at once. I do like this though. And Uesugi seems... well.. lame. XD Good start sweetheart. ^.^ Keep going.
xanthofile 2005-07-02 ch 1,	abuseyour style is definately improving, but is still your very own. the humor is always...well, effective in my case. this story seems to be interesting, at the very least. and i have no idea about the japanese bit, so you could hope to at least fool me. lol

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