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| sweetbabii45 2008-03-17 ch 2,  | abusei like it =] |
| LadyOfLiterature 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked this a lot. Great writing, plus a lot of humour to keep the story flowing. |
| Elizabeth07 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abuseWhen I was reading the story I had trouble trying to figure out what year the story is supposed to be set in. From your description, it seemed like it supposed to be a set in the past, but, the story reads like it is set in modern times, when you re-write, you need to fix this. But, otherwise, the story has great promise, and it kept me intrigued. Only one thing, the first two chapters seemed too rushed. Slow down the pace a little. |
| A Dark White Rose 2007-10-22 ch 2, | abuseaww. i wish u luck on your writing! A Dark White Rose |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-07-18 ch 2, | abuseawesome chapter...I love your story...cant wait for more..hope you update soon |
| The Latest Plague 2007-07-01 ch 2, | abusethis is good, and funny too! lol update soon! |
| anacharlie 2007-06-29 ch 2, | abuseIt's cute and funny. I hope you keep writing. And I'm curious about the Masked Man. I mean, you've mentioned him on the 1st chap and he's the title. =) |
| BrownEyedBeauty 2007-06-28 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story. It looks promising. I hope you finish it, I'd love to see what happens next. I was also wondering, what year is it in your story? Great chapter, update soon! |
| Maranwe Telrunya 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseFor your first story ever, it's good... but you CAN use she, he, her, him... instead of naming the character every single time. haha. And more description! Tons more... oh, commas, too. There were a bunch missing. I love the name Damien... Cute story. |
| Enaid 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abusei like that the era is different than ur other stories. its cute so far. cant wait to learn about the Masked Man!! update soon |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abusei like so far. please continue! |
| nano 2006-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abusegood job! It really pulls you in on the intrest margin. i can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Ghost Love Score 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseIt's very good for yourfirst story. I'm a stickler for historical acuracy though. Is it set in victorian England or Regency? |
| Seek 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseNot bad... although what year is it in? |
| OutcastedAngel 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI was enjoying it until the end and then you just cut it off. I don't blame you though. The way you ended it hooked me. I want to find out where this relationship is going. Keep on writing and please update soon. |