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| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseDark poetry, I like it. >D One little mistake that I have spotted, though. You forgot the space between "Her" and "Skin." Other than that, you did an awesome job. Two thumbs up. |
| BlutEngel Royale 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was possibly one of the best works I've read. Everything quoted here is so nicely placed, it's quite an inspiring piece. The last line is a definite favorite. |
| We're not working out 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abuseInteresting poem... strangely dark. If are interested, I wrote a cannibalistic one shot. The Taste of Pain. I'd be interested to see what you think. -Peace |
| neath the willows 2005-11-01 ch 1, | abusesometimes i wonder whether self destruction is the true meaning of life. keep writting |
| Spiral Artist 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseSuch an amazing, dark, violent vision of childhood fading to adolescence! (or self-mutilation...) |
| Cynicallia 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, I find it hard to find the words to say just how impressed I am by your originality and depth. |
| Spleeny 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuse"The purity has disappeared This soul fallen from grace The under-statement of the year is always changing" I believe that was the Shadows Fall-esque part, but now I'm not quite sure if I was reading a different poem of yours. Anyway, this is lovely, and the last line is the very best. |