that was beautiful, so well written. I liked it a lot. ^^

i like the idea for this poem. but there were some, ok, MANY grammatical errors in this. For example, "Every time I found glimpse at this photo." 'found glimpse' is a strange phrase. perhaps, 'glimpsed at this photo'? Also, "which can’t be mend." 'Mended' would be the right word there.

There were also some confusing lines. Like, the 2nd to the last line. i would suggest re-writing this, with the same main idea in mind.

the poem's concept is good, just keep working on it.

there's something wrong in the first line i guess, although i can't tell what it is...the second to the last line can be quite confusing and i have only understood it on my second read-through...when i first read it, it made me ask how will i forget the things that will happen if i haven't gone through them?...you might want to fix it...but the photograph idea is really great...

truly yours...