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| myownlife 2006-05-23 ch 1,   | I liked it. The fact that it was a very hopeful thing, it made me thinkl(also, thanks for reviewing my pomes ^^) |
| CrazyCheerChick 2005-07-03 ch 1, | When you are done one line...you just jump to the next. Now dont get me wrong- thats fine! But maybe you wanted something to seperate it, such as a , or a - or whatever you feel like! But other than that, I have nothing else to pick on. Its a wonderful poem, and I lloved it! Keep writting and updating! ~Kelsey |