sad...u need 2 get these published in books or something

good enough

Wow, amazing work!

the numbers are interesting... I like it a lot

Wow, powerful emotions are just flooding this poem. The raw emotions are almost painful to the reader. Beaituflly written.

Keep it up.

Wow...I was intrigued by the way this song had no summary but it really doesn't need one, it's that great. Really really beautiful - the emotions spill out with your words.