Hey, Thanks for reviewing my story I have been a little lazy lately so I have to push myself to get on track. I really like this story. It's not what I usual go for, but I really want to know what happens. I am looking forward to Ryanne and Kira meeting. Hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.

Very interesting chapter, dreamer. I like your details, very nice. Continue writing. I'll have to read chapter five soon. K. see you later.

MN

Oh, at the begining of the first chapter you said you were inspired by Iain M. Banks. I've heard that name before, what type of books does he write? Anywho, very lovely chapter(s). Sorry I haven't been able to review every chapter. ::sniffles::

Oh, and to answer your question about me moving around and stuff, my parents are in the military, so we move from base to base every couple of years. ^^

Well, do keep writing! ^^ Hope to see an update soon!

Kchan

Wow, great chapter. I like the beggining, its really funny. Keep up your writing!

Miss-Nina

::claps:: Very nice! I love your descriptions! ^^ Do continue?

Kchan

this is a really well writen piece..i enjoyed reading it also..i am looking forward to read the rest and i like the contrast between the differnt people..excellent work.

~Laura

cOOL! This is great. Its really descriptive. Go dreamer! Yay. Is R and W things Review? I got it! Yay.

Miss-Nina

Wow, this is good. Keep writing dreamer. Someday you'll be a famous writer. Did you forget I'm eleven? ^_^

Miss-nina