I loved this! It was good. Love it love it love it! hehe... I said Love alot. Ayways keep up the great work.. This reminds me of me. Glad you can write poems that go along with other peoples lives..

=Desy

What an awesome and very well written poem! Very well done! ^_^ Cool! Also, thank you for your reviews and thank you for adding me to your favourites list! Awesome! ^_^ Yay! Keep writing!

~Anna~

Really emotive poem, the ending in particular is very powerful, although I'm not sure about the flow in the penultimate stanza. Great work, though, well done.