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| Geese 2005-07-27 ch 1,   | NIce poem, it has a nice rhythm and flow. Great job! And I'm so sorry if this true..:( |
| A Face Worth Remembering 2005-07-07 ch 1, | Hope she reads it. |
| LunarMajesty 2005-07-03 ch 1, | I like the feelings behind this poem, but it's a little bit confusing. When you say "you" and "she" are those different people? And the last line "I am so sorry" seems a little out of place, but overall I really liked the sentiment |