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| somefreakylooknchick 2005-08-20 ch 1,  | abusehehe. thanks mal. love ya |
| aries-diva-JC 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abusei really like this poem... i love the message and its very well-written... the rhyme scheme is great... u hav sum great rhymes and verses... one rhyme seemed a bit forced, tho, 'They say be likes me but I know its not true./Someone check his fever cause he must have the flue.'... it seems like u just picked to random words that rhymed, it didnt really connect to the rest of the poem that well... but other than those two little lines, it was great... keep up the good work... btw, if u hav time and want to, i'd luv reviews on sum of my stuff, especially 'once in a blue moon'... thanx... |