Reviews for Nobody Wanted To Be My Mother

Reviews For: Nobody Wanted To Be My Mother

Rovandin 2005-12-20 ch 1,	Qiute powerful. "The tears of old children crowd I draw them on a white hair throw in the air the wet chain and wish that I'd had a mother"~Rammstien's Mutter
Ecka J Skittles 2005-11-08 ch 1,	very intriguing, i like the way you placed your words. I agree on some parts to. good job
twidaleedee 2005-08-10 ch 1,	angsty. ch'est chic.
kit-kat 2005-07-17 ch 1,	I love it, it oes sowhoe someone who was adopted might feel, I think you grasped it all very well!katie
alyssa 2005-07-08 ch 1,	wow... is that you?
BasketweaverJesser 2005-07-04 ch 1,	This is great angst and portrays it rather well. I'm not much for ansty poems, though.I was the pass-along kid in my family so I can relate to this, though.~Jesser~
Cyberknight 2005-07-03 ch 1,	YOU ARE NOT A MISTAKE. I weep for you. I can only pray that you learn what it is you are here for. I bet it's something really important! Let this poem have a purpose. Let it show emotion to those who take their families for granted.
Cursed-Destiny 2005-07-03 ch 1,	This is beautiful, I haven't read many poems on this topic, and you wrote about it well. Very sad, but beautiful.
beti213 2005-07-03 ch 1,	wow. I can honestly say that I have never read a poem on this topic-I'm impressed on how well you pulled it off! The ending threw me; I didn't know why you were writing it and then... now you have two reasons for the poem! the only suggestion I have is to have someone look this over for grammar errors, as it is really hard to see your own and maybe harder for me to point them out by review. they weren't a huge deal, but still. love the poem and keep writing!
Dragonzz 2005-07-03 ch 1,	wow... This is so sad. Great... Classic... ~dragonzz~
notated descant. 2005-07-03 ch 1,	that was so sad... made me cry...That was really beautiful... if that's what you went through, you captured it well

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