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| i hOld tHe kEys oF lifE 2005-07-19 ch 1,  | abusethis is very deep.. yur open about yur feelings.. It is kind of scrambled as yu said but its good..PS.. sorry it took me so long to review yu back for reviewing my Just an(d) opinion.. but if you want you can review me again and then ill review you too.. |
| Unready 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abusegood work |
| eighteen hundred 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseIt would've been better without the first two stanzas, I think. They sort of dismiss the whole piece, in a way. |