oh my ** god.

short and striking.

i could've sworn i'd already reviewed this. oh well. that last line is a ** shotgun blast to the chest. god damn, you are a genius.

wow. really. whirling.

Wow, this poem got me thinking right from the start!

I adored your alliteration in the first stanza. Is "him" humility?

This has a desperate feel in it, nicely conveyed!

Ah, very thought-provoking. I love the multiple layers to this, the feeling of empowerment, splendid!

I love this abstract vein that holds. I was going to pick out my favorite parts, but I don't believe that I can. It's all so amazing.

I love the line The world is gripping a pistol in its hands & the last line.. awesome job