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Sharakinpaix 2005-07-16 . chapter 1
Wow, I learned a lot of new vocab words today...

I couldn't really understand this one till that amazing line: "modulating in the hollows of our clavicles." It got me thinking about constantly changing.

And when I looked up "modulating," this word's meaning in electronics got me thinking about radiowaves, then TV then media in general. What media doesn't live to influence and deceive? I loved how politically twisted this was: "SEGREGATION IS AS GOOD AS ANY COMMUNE." Commune has so many meanings; what a perfect weapon for a politician to lie with!

Way to go, Escapist! You have what Chinese people call "si xiang," or individual thought. I have a lot to learn from you. Thanks for the inspiration!
do not resuscitate 2005-07-14 . chapter 1
how do you think to string these words together? your mind must be an amazing place.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-07-12 . chapter 1
modulating in the hollows of our clavicles- and how do you think of such lines? thanks for your support, by the way. I appreciated it.
S.R.Deosil 2005-07-09 . chapter 1
Honestly, i understood nothing. but it just goes to show how ignorant 16 year old female malaysians are. Ah well.I managed to get lots of funky vibes from it. can't decipher it... ah well...poetry was never meant to be understood. only reated during fits of passion.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-05 . chapter 1
Full of passion and political turmoil.
smile persephone 2005-07-04 . chapter 1
I don't exactly know what to say; it was so amazing. The formatting and style was perfect for this. It flows so beautifully too. Wonderfully done!
simpleplan13 2005-07-04 . chapter 1
wow.. powerful wording...& awesome format
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