Well, while it's still on here its very good. I love the message it gets across and how powerfully tragic it is. The imagry is stunning and horrific, and you most deffinatly got your idea across. This is a very well done poem, and thank you for showing that the words don't have any meaning if they're not followed through. If your "friends" made you feel this way those Chrissy and Jessi, you don't need them. They don't deserve you, and I'm sorry that you had to go through that. Keep up the good work. P.S I also like how its kind of 2 poems in one. Again, you did an awsome job.

Oh my lord, Cy I love it! xD Very discriptive and beautiful and gorey and wonderful. Sheer brilliance! *applauds*