If you just made me read a Mary Sue, I swear to God Almighty I will slit my wrists and end it all right now.

Seriously.

Anyway, well written, beautiful imagery, but just a bit sappy.

Keep it up.

Aw, that's incredibly cute. I love the ending. Great job. Keep writing! :)

What made you decide on the names?

Aw...ti's very romantic. It's cute and she seems very happy about how the marriage. It's life-like.

WOW! i got goosebumps. that was one of the deepest pieces i've ever read.