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| Katharina Minola 2005-11-25 ch 1,   | This is SO sad. But it's very good, too. Excellent job!*smiles* |
| Anime Freakizoid 2005-08-25 ch 1, | tragic and vividly beautiful, a wondreful piece that classic in my book. sorry i haven't reviewed in a long time, i finally started high school! but i promise to read more this weekend, you are an AWESOME writer! I updated IMMORTAL PHANTOM a few days ago so I hope I can hear from you soon! cya later, keep luck w/ more pieces!-anime freakizoid X^_^X |
| Accalia Aeryn 2005-07-17 ch 1, | Oh wow! This is awesome! I love the way you wrote it. This has to be one of your best pieces yet! I mean, it's like you're there while you're reading. Great writing! ps.- I really like the name Ivan Serov for your story Rendezvous at Eternity. =D |
| BlueJayWalking 2005-07-17 ch 1, | Goodness.. you're such an amazing writer! You capture things so vividly! This is so moving. The transitions between the different periods in the girl's past helped to portray her innocence and bravery.. the first part really set it off poignantly. Thank you for writing this! I'm definitely reading more of your work! |
| dry sherry 2005-07-11 ch 1, | Aww . . . and I was just getting ready to go to sleep, too. Now I have to read something funny~ Ah, well. The story was a surprise. I thought it was going to be about the father, and the little girl just a sideline character. Obviously not, which was brilliant. I liked how you brought it full circle, with the phoenix, and the character was admirable (if pitiable - and I hate how I sound arrogant and condescending when I write this...gr). The transitions were good, more than good - both the little girl and the same grown woman wanting to be "just like dad" really tore me up. You would think that adult life would bring harsh realities to little girl's dreams (and, in a different way, it did), but the woman held on to that dream. Not many people would do that, and that's wonderful and regretful at the same time. Well, that was a nice (if sad) read, and now I must begin my quest for a light-hearted, fluffy, all-round cheerful fic in which the biggest angst a character must face is a broken fingernail. Any suggestions? Yoo-jin ps - if you haven't read Anaum's email yet, bad news: Jane can't go and doesn't know when she's free. Damn. |
| Darthen 2005-07-11 ch 1, | That was amazing! This has got to be one of the best works on this site! Your imagery is fantastic and you really can feel the peice. Awesome job! I mean, holy crap, I am literally blown away. Superb! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-06 ch 1, | This was beautiful and heart-breaking. The description and insight into the character were each accomplished in perfect quantities. |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-07-05 ch 1, | wow, a very profound piece of writing~ i love the way you narrated the whole thing~~ keep writing! |