nice poem...I am sad for London now. I was to visit there this summer and visit family. I hope for recovery for your salvation.

I'd love to go there someday. I need to be a millionaire for all the places I want to go! anyway, nice job on this. I love the last line.

You establish well the feeling of the place, how about details of its appearance and what they evoke?

I love London as well, and I hope to spend more time there someday. Lucky you, getting to live so much closer to such a wonderful city, though I'll stick with my Philadelphia for now. I can feel, through the poem, how London sets you free. It brightens the spirit to feel your freedom through this poem.

Maybe you'll want to read my "London," it's short.