whoa... this is incredible!! I LOVE it, gorgeous. I've had thoughts like this on more than one occasion. I love the flow and rhyme scheme, its wonderful. "Holding your hand I stare into your face" my favorite line. Presents a picture so believable. Anyways keep it up & write on,

-Em

Gorgeous work. Love metaphor, and the imagery is just beautiful. Definitely impressive work here. It paints such a lovely, sad picture. Great work. "Twilight" is such a powerful word. Hope you are doing well ^_^

wow. really good. I know this may sound a little dumb, but, what's a Mormon?? I'm sorry if that offends you, but I don't really know, and I want to know... honestly... anyway, thanx 4 ur review 4 "Why?"!! ^^ it was really appreciated!! Am I rambling? O.O I was also wondering if you could plz r&r my other stories? thanks!! once again: this poem is really good!! i like it a lot!! u rock!! happeh writings!-Shaddow

Hey, I know it has been quite a while since Ilast posted a review. I just feel kind of monotonous saying the same thing over and over again:You are great, you are great, you are great!God Bless,Dr. Colleen

Its nice to come back to your work after such a long time and see that you have improved!

What a powerfully wistful feel... Beautiful!

powerful and well written... i love the last three lines especially

Heya,

Wow! This poem is deeply moving, and makes me wish that someday I could love someone as much as the poem describes ... I especially admire the way you used the title - Twilight - as a metaphor for the poem and of dying love. Simply amazing ;)

~ Ethereal Kisses ~

I liked it. Especially the imagery as if speaking to someone or something. Great job.

Thanks for your wonderful review, as always! :)

Best Wishes, Brittney

Awe that's so sweet. SORRY for the self advertisment but can you check out some of my unreviewed poems and let me know if they are ne good!