I like this too. Good amount of darkness and angst in there, another great chorus. queenvixta

This is very good, when I was little, I used to have to say now I lay me down to sleep and you know how it goes anyway, amazing piece!

Chilling...scary but beautiful

good job. Your rhyming scheme was a little bit off though. Try to keep it consistent. Otherwise it doesn;t flow right. I liked it though. Please check out my stuff too!