"Fear" is just so darn beautiful.

Wow. I know you posted this ages ago, but I've just found it now and it's incredible. I love how it ends, the assonance of "love" and "blood," that dull sound that just stops. Gorgeous. Keep writing! :)

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This is so true, which is one of the reasons why I like it. It's short and sweet, and even though it's short, it shows a lot. Great job!

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I liked this poem because it was interesting and new. It was odd, but that's what makes it great. But I'm sure youknow thatlaready. =) "the scent of knives won't come off of me" is a very cool line. Great job!

these are lovely.

a very beautiful piece! love it!

~SarahJane

brillant! love it!

~SarahJane

6: this ending bit says so much. i get it.& this whole thing was so pretty and beautiful. wonderful job. : )

5: 'gushes light and spikes of flares/until there is a hole in the sky/a new moon for the night' i love that.

4: i love this one the most. it's beautiful. and the last two lines? a killer.

3: love the third and fourth line.

2: i love every line of this. particularly the last three lines.

1: a really nice way to begin this.

gorgeous. Every word perfectly selected.

i love how you wrote the radio dial remains a virgin untouched and dwelling. very good. keep writing!

~SarahJane