Hmm...looks like you've got mixed reviews on this one, wolfie...I think I shall take a little of both sides. The beginning is really peaceful and you do a nice job of making it flow. It's simple, but I could tell it was from the heart-which is all that really matters. The second part breaks the flow a little, from being peaceful and all to...I don't know, wavering and full of ideas and thoughts that have already been written down many, many times. Don't get me wrong, it is a beautiful message you have there, just lacking individulaity and the same creativity that you began with. And the last part, I think was really a mix of both for me. I loved how you repeated "Forever" at the end, it was a nice touch. Anyway, great job, keep prasing Him and keep writing. God Bless, silent.

Love it! Beautiful and heartfelt. Keep up the good work! Going on my favs list :)

Well that’s nice. I am not sure it is very healthy but it’s a nice idea.

Aside from being just plain out stupid, it was poorly written. Sorry.