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Crissixoxo 2007-11-27 ch 12,	I know you haven't updated in a long time but I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE I'M BEGING YOU UPDATE! :-) please?
eye-kandii 2007-05-03 ch 6,	keira lee is...childish?! but shes fun too!! whe! gud story btw =) heres a cookie,im obssessed too
MuffinLuff 2007-05-02 ch 1,	aw poor girl!i like her tho!
JusticeWriter 2007-03-29 ch 12,	Haha! That was great! Please update soon.
Kim 2006-11-06 ch 12,	I love this! Cant wait for an update. . . :D Bye
Chaotic Romance 2006-08-29 ch 12,	This is so good! Wow, your writing style is so simple, but it totally works for this story!! And, here's another thing, I didn't look at your profile before I read this, so some of the parts where you used the words "black thong" gave me kind of disturbing mental images... lol... but I checked out your profile and sure enough you were Australian... so, now I feel incredibly stupid... ahem anyway, so I only found a few minor errors in this (but everyone's got those, so no worries there) and other then those this story is awesome, I hope you update really soon!
Susurrent Threnody 2006-05-18 ch 12,	lol. love the pizza incident, and the orangutang from last chapter.
j.m.burford 2006-05-07 ch 11,	ABOUT TIME YOU UNPDATED...SO FAR SO GOOD.
flights.of.fantasy 2006-05-06 ch 12,	ahh gemma had it coming. she's such an atypical bytch.
dotcult 2006-05-05 ch 12,	lol YOU had a smile on your face? i read your reply and had to re-read my review. (i was thinking you must've had the wrong person, lol). loved this chapter, though my loathe for alex lives on. on a side note, i went into a department store for 3 minutes...and came out with a dress that fit me...as picked out by my GUY FRIEND. (i mean, hell froze over that i was going dress shopping in the first place. THEN satan himself came out with margaritas when steven picked out a halter-top sundress thing that looked good on me and i wouldn't mind wearing too much.) EVERY SINGLE PERSON i spoke to at the wedding (which was why i was getting a dress. two of my besteste friends married each other) complimented me on my dress. like, for real. they asked me where i got it and everything. all in all, a fun experience, but oh yeah i was reviewing a story, hm? the SAT is tomorrow and i dont have a brain! requests more simone and timmy and gemma and alex oh, and while im ordering you around here, i'd really like to know what simone thinks of timmy (WITHOUT her falling for him, or him for her) and i'd like to see timmy vs gemma or something. all these run-ins are hillarious. and as you can tell, you can write the story better than i. carry on, author-woman. :P
Colorful-Fuzzy-HATZ 2006-05-05 ch 12,	OMFG! U USED MY DRESS! OMG THAT IS SO KOOL! UPDATE!
mel 2006-05-04 ch 12,	the beginning was kinda...disturbing... especially since i just watched an old lady doing it with a 20 something yr old in history so yeah.>Its creepy. I keep on thinking thai kissing some model ...EW LIKE OMIGOD (that was my lame attemt at airhead btw have u noticed we do sometimes talk like that even when we're not SATIRIZING someone? SERIOUSLY WE DO!) OK, im seriously bored now, i've got nothing to do so i'll just say buh bai now kekekekeke
mel 2006-05-04 ch 11,	IT'S THAI!ARGH thai flirting?!?!?!HILARIOUS LOL, see i'm in art and we have turner again which means im obviously in the comp room and doing absoulutely nothing apart from reading ur story so... Anyhoo, u must update within the next two weeks okay? GOOD. Alrighty tata
mel 2006-05-04 ch 10,	my o my, i havn't reviewed in such a long time. Just thought i'd say that my story is going no where except for maybe the trash...and right now i'm doing damn english stage context thingy mabob. I, in typical mel style, cant be bothered to go online so i thought i'd rant about here... ARGH! BTW i still haven't read ur updated chappies, i was going to during pd but then well...we kinda...u noe...ran out of time and instead had to rush and put in three copies... Ok i'm seriously getting bored and i want to read about thai so off i go now hi ho, hi ho, off to work i go >the song goes something like that?!?! PS. [PCD]Ooh, you've got it bad I can tellYou want it bad, but oh wellDude, what you got for meIs something ISomething I don't needhey! [Will.I.Am]It's funny how a man only thinks about the...You got a real big heart, but I'm looking at cha...You got real big brains, but I'm looking at cha...Girl, there ain't no pain in me looking at ya... [PCD]I don't give a...Keep looking at my...'Cause it don't mean a thang if you're looking at my...I'm a do my thang while your playing wit cha ...Ha, ha-ha, ha-ha, ha-ha I LOVE U...(not really)
dreaming-angel15 2006-05-03 ch 12,	Sugar Bowl? even I can come up with a better name than that...like...ok, maybe I can't! Jeez! Don't mock me! lol. Poor Keira-lee. Alex is hitting on her (EW!) and Gemma wants to get revenge and or kill her. Lol. Please update.

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