Something about stage fright...? That's all I have. I'm not known for my insightful commentaries. But I did like it, kinda light angst, kinda out-of-body angst.

wow i had to read your poem two times it is deep in a meaning, i do think you should make it a little clearer to a hint on to what you are intending to say not to big a hint though. this poem really makes me think to where i think i figured it out, but dont want to be wrong. so great job keep up the great work.