 K. Smith 2005-07-05 . chapter 1 Another very good poem. Writing a poem about a particular object tends to go one of two directions. In one direction, it can end up lacking a quality of "beauty and magic," and this seems to happen to many poets who undertake an endeavor such as this. However, you've saturated this piece with that exact quality in a way that seems to flow along perfectly to the reader...maintaining a rhyme scheme at the same time! Beautifully descriptive as well, excellent job. |