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Reviews For: Porcelain Scream
K. Smith 2005-07-05 . chapter 1
Another very good poem. Writing a poem about a particular object tends to go one of two directions. In one direction, it can end up lacking a quality of "beauty and magic," and this seems to happen to many poets who undertake an endeavor such as this. However, you've saturated this piece with that exact quality in a way that seems to flow along perfectly to the reader...maintaining a rhyme scheme at the same time! Beautifully descriptive as well, excellent job.
Oriel Vaughn 2005-07-05 . chapter 1
My goodness... I almost thought I was reading Shakespeare! (It's a compliment ^^) How you come up with all those lovely descriptive phrases I cannot imagine. You have a great range of vocabulary and the admirable ability of stringing words together fittingly without making the whole thing seem too profound to be comprehensible. Keep writing - I see lots of talent :)
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