Another good poem. You've made the right choice by not applying a rhyme scheme to this piece...it flows perfectly in its current style. I'm sure this feeling has plagued just about everyone at one point or another, and you've captured it very well, and developing it in a desert setting was quite creative. Good job, keep writing.

I think most people at some point in their lives will feel exactly the way expressed in your poem. But it shows there is still hope. Great job.

I can tell after reading some of your poetry that you have a strong voice. It is sometimes hesitant in the poetry, but you have great potential. Soon your voice will rise with a fire that burns and shines. It is not quite there yet, but it is strong and growing.