Woah... O_o really nice. Written really good. o.0

wow this is beautiful depth.

wow...just wow...this is splendid work! it's so deep and lovely. great work!

Sorrow

wow.. beautifully written... I love the last stanza.. awesome poem

Nice theme of darkness and light.

That was beautiful! It went really nicely with the music I was listening too. Excellent.

wonderful, you grow more and more after each poem. I can see the progress in you and your certainly pleasing me. Keep writing. -ADD

deep. very nice, and well described. the last lines are great! keep up the great work. _-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

Gently sad and longing - I like this poem.

Loved the easy tone - nothing crazy - just like a "quivering light". Pretty... the whole poem drifted along.

By the way, have you seen the movie Howl's Moving Castle? This poem reminded me of it... you should definitely check out that film - it will expand your mind and fill you with renewed imagination...

Thanx for the review _

such a silent night.

eerie and being.

hm, you wrote that on my birthday (just a passing observation.)

beautiful poem.

subtle beauty ) very well written and it flows very very well. beautiful work

Serenity & poignancy of emotion combined with words flowing perfectly as a tone to this beautiful work.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

This is really good. I love all the images that the words seem to play over and over again in your mind. Great job.

Thanks for the review!

Best Wishes,Brittney

wow, i like this. the last stanza is powerful! well done!

tuesday