this story is so dark yet I still like it. I hope for a happy ending even though a bittersweet one seems more likly.

its a great story!! i can't wait to read more 83 i wonder who will end up with who? =]

:( aw! I guess you're not going to be updating this are you? it's a really good story too! well I hope you do update it!

So, I take it this fic has been discontinued? Dissapointing, since it's actually a very beautiful, dark story and has the potential to be really REALLY great. I hope you re-consider the apparent discontinuation and revive this story? I'd be one happy fan ^^

OMG, Julitina, I love you?!

Ok, don't know about that one, but this story is so addictive...

Love this chapter. Olny thing is, I wish that you would write more... It's so good...

Oh, I luff you for commenting on my journals!

*hugs you and leaves cookies and littchi candy*

-Kyo

that's okay, I love this story, the tone is so beautiful.

You updated! COOLNESS! Great chapter!

Lol- I bet he tastes good! XD (See's Chris-sama, holding the fan...) Okay, he doesn't! Just don't bob me! But it's okay, they're not shoddy just...I'm out of words. Sorry.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Again, it's okay just for the lack of description. You've got the talent Love, you're just not using it at full extent. But I enjoyed either way...though it was a bit sad...the beating I mean.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Hm...this is a bit odd now, still good but a tiny bit confusing. It's the the scene jumps, it's the actions. Maybe detail them a bit more, give the characters more background...

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Good start. The way you'd jump from one scene to the next was great, not many can pull off scenes like that (fast paced I mean) well. You did a wonderul job on it and I hope you continue with it, fantastic work.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

Hai! I luff this! I really ish that you would write more! I'm in love with poor sam...

Aw, but why? I like it...hehehe.

The PoV's. are interesting and s lightly kinky...Aw poor Adam.

I really enjoyed this story. The words flow nicely...Not to insult, but could you be just a bit more discritive? Sorry if I sounded rude,Kyo-chan

I love reading angst on rainy afteroons, and this one fits the bill. I love the way you manage to inject a common theme in every chapter. And that part where Adam said Adam should have been his brother... I just went "Aw..." :)

I think it's perfect the way it is. I love the style you put into this story, it just makes it feel so alive.