That is awesome. I like thinking of the way animals might view the world also.

I absolutely love this poem. You completely read my mind. lol something like that was what i was planning to write next in my poem series. But, everytime i go to the zoo it is litterally painful to see all those animals in cages...just for everyone to look at. I love wolves in that, that is what humans are supposed to be toward eachother.. keep writing you're doing very well.

that was amazing. Really! I hardly ever use animals in my writing- and after reading this I might try it. This poem is so true, too. I'm guessing that the dull concrete forest is the zoo? I enjoyed your imagery. Maybe you could try to use words that people hardly ever use, like somniferous... haha, I do it sometimes just as an experiment, usually it turns out pretty well too. Write more poems!! I'll check back :)-Katep.s.- I added a new chapter to Judith, check it out if you've got the time