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| sleeping Pisces 2006-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseThis haiku is briming with innocence. I liked the word use and the imagery was crystal clear. Nice work. Daze |
| multiples of six 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI love the word "chaste" in the first line. But it seems so cut off at the end.. creating, growing, and what?! It's pretty, anyway. =) Now why have you not posted anything new in so long? Write!! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseNice element of the growing, cycle of life in this. |