I didn't have time to read one of your chapters right now so i thought i'd just read a poem. Typical obsession, this poem displays it well. Nice writing there. I like it.

Hi, it's me! Wow! You are depressing me with all your not-love poetry! Over all though, it's pretty good. Keep writing poetry. You do it well!

I actually like this poem. There's something about it that appeals to me! Great piece; keep writing!

Anna