heh, yeah this stuff is rising and getting out of hand if you ask me. I mean, I don't care of people want to marry the same sex but this whole thing about it is getting out of hand

~Sorrow~

this is really good...yes that kind of thing is wrong and you passed that point around very nicely. great work

~Sorrow~

-Very- connected-- DENIED. Yeah, it's that old, stubborn blood that tells traditional minds that the world is black and white and still flat. Thi sis the kind of poem where you don't have to think too hard about the logic, and just have to let the imagery take place. I'm freely able to interpret it without being led into a lost quadrant by over-ambiguity. This was wonderfully written, and the annexed piece is sad and powerfully pertinent. Silky, simple, but meaningful words.. I don't know how you pull these off.

Current events and a connection to the poem. No one cna top that!

Keep it up.

I love the way that you weave this all together, beautiful. The last part is the most amazing.

Keep it up.

interesting, reminds me of a backup article for school. thats not bad, i like backup things, interesting though.

current events check.

this is an amazing piece, lav. the power to what your saying overflows the piece amazingly well and is just beautiful. love it, as always pure beauty in your words.

~* noelle

This is interesting.

hmm...it does connect. i liked the poem much more(duh.) but this was interesting information.

~tuesday

I LOVE it.

its so amazing, because it does happen, this predjudice, of racism and homophobia.

i am not homosexual myself, but i do ever so hate predjudice.nice job on such a touchy subject (as some would consider it)

This is well-written on numerous levels. How you weave the conflicts utilizing "black" and "white" is skillfully accomplished. Esp. the end with the white lines as scars and black lines as demerits. Turmoil and brutal themes - very well done. One of my favorites.

This was written in a beautiful way. I like it.

oh, lovely."(historical monument;/do not destroy,/mutilate./violate.)" love this part...great work!

~tuesday