Hey leigha. um... i forgot to tell you that i changed my main address for login to "Paige_Marie_Halliwell" it's tiffy@parallel.tzo.com. same address. I got the email from you. It made me cry. :( (Dad let me read my emails) I hope that someday I can be your baby again. Plz tell me if i still am. I have new poems up on here. Plz check them. :)

this is good...i know how it feels big time...well done...the flow and the wording is amazing...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

aw this is really sad but i love it. its amazing. you have talent. keep up the good work =] please R&R my stuff too please

WOW, THIS IS AMAZING! Great work on this!

I'm going to pray for this angel now. I hope she finds her way! Great poem though. I really like how the lines are short and broken up.

what about me? angel... :( i'm about to cry. hell, i AM crying. when did you write this? i wanna talk to you so much right now. ~holds you close~

M.. i think it's pretty good on the whole. The repeated pattern "No one.." and "Back to.." is good. Everything else I feel is just average.. try to add a little more imagery.. just something that differs from the normal way of speaking. Something that means more than you would think for the amount of space it takes up, if you get my drift. Right now, it doesn't seem much different than a bunch of a bunch of phrases meaning the same thing: "Her life is meaningless", "No reason to hope", "Nothing can help her", blah blah blah. Repetitive, in other words. Just cut it down, say what needs to be said, and say it in the way that conveys exactly what you want it to. Cause that's what poetry's all about, eh?